Monday, February 8, 2010
what awakes me at night
In the night alot of things wake me up in the night. number 10: my brother right after i fall asleep he gets a nose bleed and i dont know how. number 9: my 2012 dream. now the things that i hate. number 8: my dad playing call of duty world at war at 9:OO PM due to his acident. number 7: my dog named Paris her breed is a choclate lab breathing hard. number 6: when my grandpa comes and he sleeps across the hall and he snores loud. number 5: having to go to the bathroom. number 4: hearing a sound that i had in a dream and i hear it 5 minutes later in real life. number 3: a dream about me falling so i jump up in real life. 2: a fight on tv that i hear. and the number 1 thing that bugs me and wakes me up. number 1: my mom telling me to get up and i have that voice stuck inside my head. good bye.
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i think you where listing and you could have put more detail.
ReplyDelete2012 dream lol very nice writing
ReplyDeletelittle too listey gamefrek
ReplyDeletei think it was listy and not that much description in it.
ReplyDeletebrillent work but more disscripsion like how did it fill when your brother gets noise bleeds and what happens in your dream in 2012 but brillent work
ReplyDeletei was doing a top ten thing like that one guy on the radio. so yea it is supposed to be listy duh.
ReplyDeletedamn im hungrey now
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