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Bill

Bill
my favorite left 4 dead ( pc ) person

Wednesday, April 28, 2010

Bike crash!

One day i got this wierd 2 wheeled machine with 2 smaller wheels. ( of course now i know it is a bike but back then i was only 4.)and attached to this machine was two small foot things as i got on my dad was holding me as i started to move fast and faster and then every thing started to slow down. as i started to wonder where i am and where i was. as i looked down and i saw my 4 wheeled machine come to a slow stop i wondered how i got up here in the first place.

Then my dad and mom whent "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" then i hit the dirty muddy disgusting ground. Then i looked at my knee and there was GALLONS of blood then every thing whent black.

"wake up come on wake up" as I started to see some light i woke up in a wierd room on a bed with my parents sitting next to me on chairs. as i looked at my knee it had a Giant scar was there as i reached for it my mom said " don't grab it, you will only make it bleed again." As i quickly pulled my arm back to strop it from picking it.So after many Minuites i had a choice to be in a wheel chair or get carried out and i awalys wanted to ride in a wheel chair so i chose the wheel chair.

When i got home my parents said you can not go to school for a while. " YAAAAAAAA" as i cried out because i hate school and i still do. This could have been worse experiance.

5 comments:

  1. I like how you said that yuo then got a big scar!

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  3. I think your story is good but some things to work on are 1. You need to elaborate on your ideas more such as when you fell show what you felt like. 2. Also, you need to show that it slows down, again, eaborating.

    I thought your story was good.

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  4. * i like how you egsaduated how you're parrents said nooooooooooooo.

    * better than last time.
    Wish put lots of more effort into it. Make it slower and more interesting words.

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  5. all reread this couldnt read the whole thing ut like it so far

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